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The way she holds her left hand now, the wrist is on top of her right elbow and should be a bit higher.
I see you tried to draw the bone structure of the hand, so you get points for that, and I'm sure that with a little more practice you'll eventually get there.
Now for the orchard and the hill, you pulled of the first one well. I can imagine it must have taken quite some time to draw each of those trees and then draw apples in them as well. You could have chooses for more of the orchard to be covered under the clouds, but the huge scale of it is shown better this way, even though that meant that you had to draw more trees.
The hill looks a bit too sharp, and I would say that's mainly because of the big dark edge. Making the hill lineless, like you did with the trees would make it blend in with the rest of the background better.
Also, if you have Photoshop you could try blur-like filters or brushes to create a better depth of field.
If you're using SAI or Painter you could try to use a wet brush to blur the colours somewhat, from what I heared they don't have filters for blurring.